Hard
Rain : by Tim Riley
Alfred A. Knopf $23
Reviewed by Peter Stone Brown
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Tim
Riley starts this book, (subtitled "A Dylan Commentary") with
such a rush of words -- much like his subject -- describing the layers
of meaning Dylan's voice gives to his songs that I had high hopes for
it. But the book is riddled
with errors in fact, history, spelling and hearing.
Wrong facts are quite common in books on rock 'n' roll (with the
possible exception of those by Peter Guralnick).
Whenever I see a factual error, I wonder what else the author got
wrong? More disturbing is
that some unsuspecting soul will read it and think it's the truth. Hard
Rain is an up-to-date analysis of Dylan's songs, albums and films and
concerts (though Riley apparently has seen few of those).
He cites Dylan's obvious influences, Woody Guthrie and Hank
Williams, and randomly assigns others such as blues singer and
guitarist, Brownie McGhee. I
have no doubt that Dylan listened to Brownie McGhee but it was his
long-time partner Sonny Terry's harmonica playing that can be detected
as an influence on Dylan. Such
confusion runs rampant. Discussing
Dylan's first record, he quotes the chorus of "Gospel Plow" as
"Keep your eye on the plow," when what is actually sung is
"hand." I believe
Riley is confusing it with the freedom song "Keep Your Eyes on the
Prize" sung to the same melody and recorded by Pete Seeger on his
We Shall Overcome album referred to in the text.
Riley hears Dylan sing "The fiddler now speaks" on the
last verse of Biograph's live version of "Visions of Johanna"
when he is clearly singing "peddler." Riley
relies on other books on Dylan which themselves are wrong.
He quotes directly from Robert Shelton's No Direction Home for the the musician credits for Blood on the Tracks because
Shelton supplies the names of musicians not credited on the album cover
when Dylan suddenly decided to re-record half the album at the last
minute. My brother happens
to play on that record and is one of the musicians listed on the cover. Shelton got his last name (which is my last name and real
hard to spell) wrong. If
Riley had bothered to check the album cover, he might have discovered
the discrepancy. Shelton is
also used as a source for the incorrect number of redone songs.
The difference in the sound of the two sessions is obvious.
Most of the original recordings were subsequently released on
Biograph and Bootleg Series Vol. 1-3 making the difference even more
apparent. If Riley can't
tell the difference between songs with several guitars and drums and
songs with one guitar, harmonica and a bass, why is this man a music
commentator? Riley also
says The Hawks (aka the Band) back Dylan on "If You Gotta Go."
A simple check of the credits show otherwise and again the band
on the track sounds nothing like the Band. Michael
Gray's The Art of Bob Dylan is the source for the incorrect statement
that Dylan took the melody
for "Don't Think
Twice, It's All Right" from Johnny Cash's "Understand Your
Man" when it was the other way around. "Understand Your Man" wasn't
even recorded until Dylan's Freewheelin' album had been out six months. In
mentioning Woody Guthrie's involvement with the Almanac Singers a
topical song group in the '40s that also included Pete Seeger, Riley
states that Burl Ives and Richard Dyer-Bennett (an art singer who
performed classical renditions of traditional folk ballads) and
Leadbelly were members. Not
true. Riley is misquoting
Joe Klein's biography Woody Guthrie: A Life, where Klein writes that the
Almanac Singers used to hold Sunday afternoon concerts in their communal
loft where Ives, Dyer-Bennett, Leadbelly and others would perform. Riley
also says that Mike Bloomfield led Dylan's band at Forest Hills, his
second "electric" appearance.
He means the Newport Folk Festival.
I was at Forest Hills, Mike Bloomfield wasn't in the band.
He correctly identifies the musicians 20 pages later (great
proofreading). As
annoying as these errors are, the interpretation and analysis of what
the songs are about is way off base.
Significance is assigned where none exists (and vice versa).
False assumptions are presented as fact.
Discussing "I Pity the Poor Immigrant," Riley follows a
bunch of nonsense about westerns, gangsters and cowboys with,
"...the song is as much about the narrator's heavy heart as about
the ethnic resentments that lead to separate codes of justice."
In real life, the lyrics are based on and quote from The Book of
Leviticus (The Blessings of Obedience , Chapter 26,
verse 19 and 20). The "I" in the song is God.
The "immigrant" represents the Jews during Exodus.
Once you have that knowledge, the song makes perfect sense, and
other interpretations seem silly. Okay,
so you have to read the Bible to know about that song, but Riley gets
more ridiculous: Analyzing "Rainy Day Women Nos. 12 and 35"
(Everybody Must Get Stoned), he says the line, "They'll stone you
when you're trying to take your seat," "can be read as a
reference to the Montgomery
Alabama bus boycott." What!?
Discussing the unreleased, "Get Your Rocks Off,"
recorded during the Basement Tapes -- a funny nonsensical song where
Dylan and The Band crack up while they're singing --
Riley states the line "Cruising down the highway in a
Greyhound bus" "alludes to the Mississippi Freedom
Riders." Uh, sometimes
a cigar is just a cigar and in the case of this song, a Greyhound Bus is
a Greyhound bus. Riley
then says "Tears of Rage" is "a soldier's curse upon his
commander... the voice of a man who followed his leader into battle, saw
his friends slaughtered for a cause he may never have fully believed in,
only to return to find his superior running for political office,
turning his back on the values that were so easily sacrificed."
In over 24 years of listening to this song, I never heard that.
At its simplest level this mysterious song could be seen as a
parent's anguish at watching a child go out in the world and become
corrupted by all the things the parent tried to warn the child against.
On a broader level the "father" is God and the
"daughter" the subjects who refuse to do His bidding.
The use of recurring images such as "thief" found in
that song and several others such as "All Along the
Watchtower" is ignored. Everything about "Tears of Rage" from the
performance to the music and the lyrics suggest a spiritual context as
do many of Dylan's songs from the same period.
Just because the song was written during the time of the Vietnam
War doesn't mean the song is about the Vietnam War. Riley
misses the obvious metaphor of "I Shall Be Released," which he
sees only "about a man in prison who hears another man's cries of
being framed." At its simplest level, the lyrics could be read this way, but
again the performance suggests another, deeper level and a companion
song to "Tears of Rage."
Bizarrely, Riley views the jokey "Nothing Was
Delivered" as the companion to "Tears."
Featuring a piano part copped from Fats Domino's "Blueberry
Hill," it is more than
likely about a dope dealer held hostage until he comes up with the
goods, with lines like "The sooner you come up with it, the sooner
you can leave." The chorus, "Take care of your health and get plenty of
rest" serves as a sarcastic warning from the mob.
Riley says the song "is a prophetic snub of Lyndon Johnson
and Richard Nixon." Riley
also insists on painting "Visions of Johanna" primarily as a
drug song based on using "rain" as drug parlance for heroin.
Wrong again, it's actually a term for meth, but mentioned in one
line (if indeed it is a drug reference) it's a minor part of the song,
which is basically about being with one person when you wish you were
with another. However,
Riley manages to find the narrator and Louise (the person he's with)
chemically addicted, and the setting a drug den.
In 26 years of listening, I always thought the setting was a New
York apartment in New York with lines like, "In this room the heat
pipes just cough." Like
most critics, Riley skims over Dylan's later work.
Admittedly, the '80s were Dylan's most inconsistent period, but
fascinating in the range of highs and lows.
He somehow comes up with the premise that "Jokerman"
(from Infidels) is about Reagan when lines like "Standing by the
water casting your bread," suggest Christ, though ultimately I
believe the song is autobiographical. Not
mentioned is Empire Burlesque's "Dark Eyes" one of Dylan's most
poetic songs ever or that the same album's "Seeing The Real You At
Last" is constructed almost entirely of lines quoted from movies. Riley's
musical ignorance is at its height when he reviews the two-volume
bootleg Blind Boy Grunt and the Hawks, a collection of leftover songs
and out takes from the Basement Tapes. On bootleg records, songs are
rarely given the correct title since (obviously) the musicians have not
been consulted and the tapes are either stolen or copied.
On the album, Dylan and the Band sing both originals and covers.
Riley correctly identifies two covers, Curtis Mayfield's
"People Get Ready" and Hank Williams' "Be Careful of the
Stones That You Throw." He
doesn't know that: (1) "I Don't Hurt Anymore" is a Hank Snow
hit; (2) "Down on Me" is an old blues song recorded by Odetta
made famous by Big Brother and the Holding Company on their first album;
(3) "Hills of Mexico" is a variant of "Trail of the
Buffalo," usually associated with Woody Guthrie and a song Dylan
still performs; (4) "A Night Without Sleep" is U. Utah (Bruce)
Phillips' "Rock, Salt and Nails," recorded by several people
including Flatt and Scruggs; and finally that "One Single
River" is "Song For Canada," a plea for English and
French Canadians to communicate with each other, available on Ian and
Sylvia's Early Morning Rain album.
Since Riley mentions Ian and Sylvia three times in the text, he
simply should be aware of this song.
All of this points to a writer who doesn't know the scope of his
material, hasn't bothered to take the time to find out and really has no
business writing about it at all. In the introduction -- the only part of the book that stands up except for the historical inaccuracies mentioned earlier -- Riley correctly states that "Dylan isn't as interested as in being understood as he is in being felt." He should have stopped right there. |